Tentative Thesis

Planned Communities have become the American Ideal because of Predictability, Safety, and ensure the pursuit of the American Dream.


What do you think?
With these issues, I will address isolation within communities (I'll possibly address gated communities), as well as safety. Even with this isolation, I can make references to the social issues behind these communities, as most did not allow Minorities at the time of construction. In terms of the American dream, I'll address the created myth of how every citizen wants a house of their own with a yard to bring up children. I can also bring up gender roles, and how some communities were built and specifically designed to have men work and have women domesticated.
Are there any problems with this that I should address? Thanks for your help.